Shabby Miss Jenn

Tuesday, September 12, 2006

The fingerprints of God...

Hello! I want some honest feedback from you! I've made this little book for Mason for a contest I'm entering and want to know what you think. What works...what doesn't? What would you change, etc.? Don't worry...I can handle the criticism! :) I just want it to look its very best before I enter it! :) Thanks so much! (Just click where it says comments below this post.)















6 comments:

Anonymous said...

I love it! The black and white is fantastic and the journalling is so touching.
-Karen (stinkerbelle)

Anonymous said...

I LOVE IT!! It's absolutely beautiful!

Katie said...

Stunning. I love the verse. The only suggestion I might have is to try it with his preemie pictures. That would be so powerful. I do think that this album of Mason now is great. I hope you win!

Anonymous said...

Very cool. Are you using Photoshop for the shadowing? Looks great. No doubt in my mind that you'll win.

Anonymous said...

What kind of contest is it? Your audience will determine a lot about what you are putting together. I really like the black and white and I like the font choice. I don't like the first picture where his face is cut-off. I know you are going for the "fingers" but just seeing the lower half of his face is distracting. On the other hand, some judge out there will consider this a phenomenal crop :)

The third picture with the two pics together would be even better if you could layer them on top of each other so that you would be seeing through the one to the other.

You can always count on your family to give you the harshest criticism! But really, it looks fabulous!

Uncle Trav.

Anonymous said...

kellie
i love those pictures! i know you'll win for sure!
love abbie

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